Friday, March 8, 2013

The Daily Write: Photo #4 (February 28, 2013)

The couple lived in a very clean, lovely and sparse but not empty house on the edge of Amazon Park.They were contemporaries of my grandfather, and perhaps like him, also professors. As a 9-year-old, I thought of them the way I thought of him - old. Old and neat. Old and contained. Old and kind.

They seemed sort of perfect to me. For one thing, each week when I went with my mom to clean their house, it was spotless. It smelled good too. Not like our place with its gaggle of barefoot children, sticky kid-sized wooden tables and avocado pits growing sprouts in murky water in Ball jars on the windowsill over the kitchen sink. No, their house smelled like it never got dirty and never was out of order. There weren't bands of children, or random hippie parents going in and out of the front door with its broken wooden framed screen door hanging loosely on one hinge. There weren't smudged honey-imbued fingerprints on the front windows. You wouldn't find remnants of dry Koolaid powder in the bathroom where one child had convinced another that it tasted good, even though she knew that the tiny packet was so sour it would make her intended target spit into the toilet.

Theirs was a house of calm and order. It was quiet, reserved and so beautiful to the girl that she wanted to stay there forever, lovingly wiping down the already clean walls of the shower with scrubbing bubbles and a soft cloth. Polishing an already perfectly clean window just for the fun of watching the Windex streaks dry on the warm days of summer. She liked the way they folded their newspapers after breakfast every morning and put them into a neat wicker bin next to the chair in the living room. And she liked the orange rubber mats on the dining room table which sat near the daisy motif ceramic napkin holder and matching salt and pepper shakers in the middle.

She liked to listen to her mom hum as she vacuumed the wall-to-wall carpet in the living room and bedrooms, and she loved to feel like a grown up as she gently folded the dish towels the way her mom showed her.

The only other people she knew who went by Mr. and Mrs. were at her school back in California. They were kind, but couldn't help her with her ache. She wanted to be with her mom during the year and wasn't, and every day seemed like torture waiting for summer. It was the best when she and her mom left her three brothers at the daycare house where they lived and went to clean the immaculate house. Humming and folding and wiping and dusting. No dirt, no mess, no noise. Just them, together.

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